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Are These Good Lyrics

these are my lyrics and its just a project right now im still thinking of more lyrics

take a number and stand aside

there are other customers in line

so wait your turn or leave this place

we dont have time for your disgrace

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Answer #1

I am not here to hurt your feelings…I am here to be honest and tell you what I really think and I am not going to say they suck but if you are just going to throw a bunch of words that ryme together that makes no since, then those aren’t lyrics!

Use some of your emotions and kick it into gear and you just might come up with am unforgetable song!

Answer #2

pretty good. try to write more of it. just make sure you don’t over think it. emotions don’t have to be complex. I write poetry which is a lot like lyrics. if you want ideas I can give you my website.

-maddie <3

Answer #3

No…

Answer #4

..what is the purpose of those lyrics?

Answer #5

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Answer #6

naw this better im top of tha moon like I work nasa im already hard I dont viarga old school like bill cosby fitted in all red like a hot tomali

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