What else can i add to this story?

I am writing a story. I am 13. It is about a girl in highschool (junior/senior) She has short hair and is kinda tomboy-ish. She decides to get a makeover and expects people to love it and fall all over her but they dont. I dont know if she gets the makeover to get more friends or get a boyfriend or why else. Please help. Thanks.

Answer #1

she should get the makeover for a guy…. :)

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