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Does anyone think this is a decent prolouge?

It's kinda long but if you have the time give it a read and tell me what you think. Note a couple of minor characters don't have any names at this point.
Craig Harper was silently fuming ‘surveillance? Surveillance? He was one of the last humans aliv...

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What really matters?

What Really Matters?
Tearfully He Holds You
What Really Matters?

The Rose - A Parable Against Jealousy
Storms Of Life
If I Be Lifted Up
Preach It!!

I Asked God
When The Going Gets Tough ...
Never Ever Stop!
Learning From The Past - A Sermon
...

19 views · Religion, Spirituality & Folklore

What do you think about my story.. ?

I'm looking for some opinions on a book that I am writing. I've dedicated lots of time to it and before I continue I would like some input. This is only a portion of the story that I am sharing -- a critical portion that is. It's a rough draft so pleas...

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The Confederate flag--Why?

Why is it that people from the southwest use the confederate flag? I went to basic combat training in SC, and in one "class" they asked if anyone thought that it was racist to put the Confederate flag on their car or for it to be flown in front of fede...

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My current situation -_- please read and help ...LONG!

OK So first thing first, my mother is and idiot, to put it lightly. She looks for love in all the wrong places, she was at one point making over 100 000 dollars a year with benefits beyond belief, and she was a foster mother with good connections. In h...

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Should I move out to keep my sanity, or stay and go nuts?

Hey Everyone,

Being the scape goat in the family I have been tormented, abused (physically, mentally, emotionally and any other way possible) and ripped to pieces inside over the years of my life. I am 18 very soon to be 19 and I am losing my sanity h...

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How different people have sex,

How they have sex, think of more? Post it:)

Accountants are good with figures.

Actors do it on cue.

Advertisers use the "new, improved" method.

Ambulance drivers come quicker.

Ansi does it in the standard way

Archeologists like it old...

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What do you think of the prologue to a story I was working on?

PROLOGUE

Soccer was always one of my best sports.

I was the keeper — everyone relied on me to keep our net safe. For my whole life I’d been accustomed to insane pressure of all sorts: shootouts, fights, exams, parties, girls... Girls were alway...

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Do you know bands like the ones on my iTunes?

Alright... Looking for some good bands that I dont already know.

Let's go through my iTunes... (and maybe you'll find something nice:] )
30 Seconds To Mars
311
50 Cent (haha)
The A'z
A Change Of Pace
A Rocket To The Moon
Adam and Andrew xD
AFI
Afro m...

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Short story +updated+ *Horror/Gore/murder*

There are only 3 questions on everyone’s lips
They speak them in slurs, as though saying them confirms them, makes them more real. Simple words horrify them, disgusts them. Three perfectly innocent
questions. Who's next? Where? Why?
But they are devoi...

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A while back, I (Sebastian Szukalski) began to write a short story.

It developed into something I rather like, but I need some constructive criticism from the lovely people of FA. So, if anyone is bothered to read this, I'd greatly appreciate feedback. Please and tankyou :)

WARNING : contains dark themes such as in ...

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