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Hi, could you please read my gcse creative writing piece and tell me what you think, I I can improve it in anyway, any advice really or help! it's not finished.
Thanks

Diary entry
Monday 24th October 1999

Dear Diary,

I was once a person fi...

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New and improved version of GCSE essay

Hi, I just improved my gcse creative writing essay, actually finished it. please read and give me advice on any ways I can improve it, any help is appreciated, I need it.
Thanks
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Dear Diary,

I was once a person filled with dreams that I wanted to p...

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A while back, I (Sebastian Szukalski) began to write a short story.

It developed into something I rather like, but I need some constructive criticism from the lovely people of FA. So, if anyone is bothered to read this, I'd greatly appreciate feedback. Please and tankyou :)

WARNING : contains dark themes such as in ...

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