Who can help me with my story(AGAIN!!)?

I think they should just start making out, out of no where. Then they make love for like 20 minutes(AHAHA) and it causes a mis-carriage. I’m crazy, though. That’s just what I would go with.

They should have this sense of awkwardness on their meeting - they’re silent most of the time and they can’t both talk straight. In the end, the guy has to get up and leave early but the next day they get to open up and discuss things, on the phone.

The girl doesn’t want to marry the guy - she feels it isn’t necessary to pressure someone in a relationship out of obligation. She says if she marries, it’ll be for her child’s sake and not for theirs. Marrying now, for her, isn’t really for love but merely for selfish reasons on their part..

Maybe they don’t talk about anything at all, really. I think that this would be the ideal spot for description. If he does love her, this would be where you describe how totally unaware she is and how much he longs to be with her. He might even blow up at some point saying “Why can’t you see it?” or something along those lines, but then they drop it. All of this just to intensify the point.

how much of an a** hole her fiance is to her and how she shouldn’t marry him.

^^agreed they should talk about their futur and how there life would be together

They should talk about they’re future together, and how certain things will change as days go by. But they should try their best not to argue.

about the whole situation if you ask me