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What do you think of this poem "Time Flies"?
Alright, I wrote this in like 10 minutes, but it felt like forever. Time flies. ha. tell me if you like it, and if I should give it to my boyfriend of 3 months. [time flies] time flies when you’re having fun time flies when I’m with you. time flies when you’re in love time flies because it’s something new. something inexperienced something irrelevent it’s something I hadn’t felt and something I learned to love. a soft kiss a tight hug. feeling the air escaping my lungs when I’m in your presence nothing else matters. and even when you’re gone, it’s nothing but resonance I hear it in your voice I see it in your eyes you’re different from the rest not a normal guy. you actually care and don’t constantly lie unfortunately, however, with you time flies..
You got some talent, thats for sure. Very well done. I would totally give it to him if I were you.
That’s wonderful actually , you did a amazing job writing this and I can tell that it really means something to you and explain how you feel. I think that if you feel comfortable with it you should give it to your boyfriend.
Poem is really great.it feels great when I read the lines of this poem.
Poem is mind blowing.Its really felt very great when I read the lines of this poem.
I know it’s early..but I think it’s going to be part of his valentine’s day present. or I may give it to him tomorrow. lol
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