What do you think of this poem called "Unspoken Affair"?

An unspoken affair and a new beautiful nightmare. Secrets bottled up, Hearts being crushed. Where will this road lead? Does he really like m? Is this just a dream? Is my mind playing A sick twisted joke on me? I pray to God That this is real life. Cause my heart couldn’t handle Dissapointment like that..

Answer #1

not bad :) keep it up.

Answer #2

It’s lovely.:]

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