What do you think of this poem and I need a name for it ?

As I sit with little to do my mind is filled withg thoughts of you As I work hard throughout the day I miss your smile thats miles away You must know,my love so true, I spend all my time…just missing you

What do you think?? What should I call it ??

Answer #1

just missing you

Answer #2

I Need You? Where are You My Heart Longs For You?

Answer #3

What about something like…

  • THoughts of you.
Answer #4

Just thought that I would say that its funny that your Username says Hollywodo undead in it, and I am listening to Hollywood undead right now :)

Answer #5

cute!

I liked the first idea thoughts of you.

the poem seems like something you would send when someone has been gone for awhile or theyre at work and you’re just trying to light up their day!

Answer #6

how about? unknown love? unknown thoughts? I dunno why I just like the word unknown sounds mysterious (hope I spelt that right) or how about ? emptiness within me!!!

hope I helped some how…ADIOS (BY THE WAY THATS SPANISH “BYE”)

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