What do you think of my improved poem?

You are everything to me. You are the only one for me. I wish it where you, and me. But alas, love goes only from me. Could you spare some love, and send it to me? Could you be so kind to say its you, and me? My love for you runs strong, what of your love for me?

Answer #1

the “you AND me” refers to the union of being referred to as one. unlike the idea of 2 seperate people, it is you and me.

Answer #2

Well,What do you mean by “ could you be so kind and say it’ you, AND me ? “ I’m wondering It doesn’t make that much sence to me…

Answer #3

this is a really sweet poem(Y) xxx

Answer #4

It has improved, and sounds pretty awesome. I know what you mean by the second to last line.

Good Job :)

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