Need help describing

I need help describing a few things/scenes for a chapter in my book; “Ice Caps and Spinal Taps” #1: A Female Vampire, without using the words; beautiful, entrancing, capivating or radiant. #2: Vampire Dormroom, shared with another girl. Without using the words dark, comforting or spacious.

Answer #1

#1. She was perfect, absolutely perfect. Her beauty was undescribable, and one would die just to touch her… #2. The musty room was shockingly cozy.

I hope I helped… =]

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