Is this any good?

I want your honest opinion please! She Mounted High

She mounted like a pro took off barrel racing down the road at the speed of light She won a silver medal but that ain’t enough she said to me I’ll die if I don’t ride I said you’ll take first next time She said no I won’t I’m gonna die if I don’t ride I raised you high It s time to let go ride away tonight marry that rich man next door I can hold in my feelings just ride She s ais no I’ll never leave your side We’ll live here with you until you die Then we’ll move on we’ll have to move on no more time You raised me right go right through the gate I won a gold medal that you told me a lot I wish we could have road side by side but then we had to move on No more time no more time to ride I’ll never ride again in good time I might ride let’s ride side by side tonight

Answer #1

It’s a Father Daughter Relationship where the Father watches her daughter barrel race in a rodeo she dosen’t win she’s upset and her fathers on the verge of dying he wants her daughter to live her life and she likes the guy next door then they are going to get married and she says her and her husband will wait until he dies to move away then her father dies and she wins a gold medal and she rides with her husband away.

Answer #2

to be honest, I read it word for word and I am confussed. I think some of it is good BUT I don’t like the title and it needs some work. I don’t know if this is a mother, daughter relationship or a lover. I don’t understand about marrying the rich guy, Just left me confused

Answer #3

im confused as well…?? the first part was good, then after that I had no idea what to picture or who to picture.

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